I teach a Science Fiction Literature class to seniors, and one of the students who knows I write challenged me to craft a dystopian story. I was hesitant, like Kurt Vonnegut, because I don't like labels, and sci-fi clings to authors long after they've abandoned the genre. Regardless, it is a good assignment for myself, and will showcase good modeling when the students will be "forced" to do the same assignment later this semester. Don't judge too harshly...
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This is the way the
world ends
This is the way the
world ends
Not with a bang but a
whimper.
T.S. Eliot was partially right. By the time she did go, most were actually
begging- “Just die already.” We couldn’t
kill her off quick enough. Who needs Earth with thousands of inhabitable
planets waiting with neon vacancy signs and untapped natural resources dying to
be utilized by a superior species?
Problem is, Earthlings no longer personified superior. By
the time Information Modification Chips (IMC) took the place of education in
late 2138, we thought we had mastered
the inequality of genetics. Don’t understand Elliot’s The Hollow Men?, there’s a chip for that. But nobody wanted poetry
chips back then. The rage was all for advanced bioengineering, hypothetical
mathematics, and anything that would help build the infrastructure that would
make interplanetary travel possible.
They never quite got there. Neither did we. We’ve been
orbiting Earth for two years now. It’s
2189, and I’ve been commissioned to write a history of the Earth during the IMC
years. (I’m more a reader, than a writer, but then, there isn’t a writing
expert on the ship, so this is what you get).

At first, bio-delivery doctors made quick work of
recognizing bad information chips, and reeducation was a fairly painless process.
Recurring migraines were the most common complaint. The World Information Group
(WIG) also set up a task force to eradicate the misinformation producers. It
was a swift and brutal reaction that showed very little humanity--administering lethal justice to the suspects on the spot.
Many of the remaining Natural Learners; holdouts and the elderly,
vocally denounced the monstrous treatment of suspects. WIG called “listening
session” to hear their complaints, and used the opportunity to try out a new reeducational
delivery system that used a high
frequency wavelength rather than a direct application to the brain opening
portal, to stream information. The protestors must have suffered the most
incapacitating migraines of all time. This system flooded the brains of the
protestors, literally melting their brains. WIG was wholly satisfied with the
results.
This wasn’t the first time overloading had caused massive
deaths. Just like after the death of the great Chip testing martyrs of 2120,
WIG reformulated the information dosage to a biologically acceptable rate, and
soon, world mandated information was being “downloaded” at night, and people
were waking up rested, alert, and smarter each and every day.

Of course, the best Chips came at a price. And overloading
could still be fatal if one tried to revolutionize himself overnight. Still,
discount Chips, black-market Chips, and even misinformation Chips flooded the
market places. WIG limited the number of Chips to 100 behavior Chips and 100
knowledge Chips, in an effort to regulate the playing field. It was not
strictly enforced. The Haves were still the Haves.
And yet, they acted less and less like humans. They grew
tired of jobs and positions, and bought new chips to master new jobs. Nobody
really stayed at a job longer than a year before they felt bored. Creativity
also suffered. People had the
wherewithal to do the jobs, but innovation stagnated. There were no great advancements ten years
after the IMC reformation. Only the very rich could afford the creativity and
problem solving Chips, and many never installed them (hoping instead to sell them back at a great profit because of their rarity).

Biodiversity suffered. Only the crops with the greatest bang
per square inch were maintained. Science controlled nature for the good of
all. For a little while, it seemed that
50 billion people could thrive with only 4% of the surface devoted to food
production.
But then the Earth rejected the modified grains. Old crops, however, wouldn’t grow either. Quickly a new generation of learners were installing Agricultural Chips, trying to capitalize on the disaster. But the Earth had been poisoned by progress, just like their brains would be.
Panic, not WIG lead to the eradication of the rest of the
Natural Learners, besides us. We 200 were protected by WIG as a sort of test
group, in a 500 acre Eden-like setting. Born naturally, without aid of Chips,
we were all self-learners. We, of course, could use information stations,
books, and archived media to find knowledge…but we were clearly behind the rest
of society. There was no portal to our brain, even if we tried. Socially, however, we were clearly superior. We
protected our own, while they cared little for each other. Individualism was
key “out there,” while we knew we needed each other to survive. The few WIG
employees who monitored and studied our behavior often laughed at our primitive
ways. They aren’t laughing now.
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Natural Learner communes were the first to be raided. |
Starvation “out there” led first to the destruction of the
last Natural Learner fortifications, and later destroyed protected parks and
forests, then zoos and biodiversity gene universities, and lastly to cannibalism.
Nobody, except the top brass at WIG knew about our facility, so nobody seriously
ever challenged our Eden enclosure, at least before we left the surface. We had
prepared, in any case, for the chaos.
With no food, and rampant crimes against humanity, WIG had
no other choice than to eliminate large portions of society. The Passover
update killed millions in some cities, billions in some regions. Food was
plentiful. Panic grew worse. Someone created the Survivalist Chip, and it
became the most sought black-market Chip.
Nobody was sure if it even worked.
It did, and it didn’t. It blocked the Passover update, but
it had a delayed side effect of near continuous migraines. Chips were sought to
treat migraines, but none were effective.

That last 1% would stumble the Earth in search of peace,
and find none.
We 200, had studied religiously. Everyone a different subject
area, to make him or her valuable to whatever it is we might need as a society.
Law, ethics, order, government, psychology, physiology, agriculture, social
Darwinism, spirituality, physics, child development and on and on.
We also studied Chip manufacturing, and electromagnetic
wavelength spectrum, and genetic mutations, and crop failures, and espionage,
and civil unrest, and interplanetary space travel. Some might say we planned
this. Some could say society necessitated this.
I say they earned
it.
Most of our success has to go to the forty or so members of
ours who headed the World Misinformation Department (WMD) who were able to
infiltrate WIG and use its systems to disseminate our agenda.

What is my specialty, you ask? Stories through history. Literature and
History. And because I had a certain propensity to recreate stories and events
in modernity, the 200 chose me as a sort of ideologue, or master planner, for
this revolution.
My favorite stories?
Noah’s Ark, The French Revolution, Animal Farm, Planet of the Apes…I’m also
a sucker for anything dystopian.
I do so wish I had somebody to share this love of literature
with, though. I sometimes think my comprehension
or interpretations might be lacking. But, to err is human…(I believe there’s more to that proverb, but I
never can remember).
They were hollow men, who cheated humanity. They did not
deserve Earth. So we, the last remaining humans, eradicated them. Every
revolution is ugly in it’s time. We’ll
see how history judges us.
This is the way the
world ends
Not with a bang but a
whimper
This it the way the
world ends
In pain and carefully
calculated.
Kind of a scary scenario...especially with the word recently out about chips to be placed in the hand.
ReplyDeleteYeah, it looks like the hand implant is a long way away from potentially happening (too many problems, not to mention the whole "mark of the beast thing"). But that doesn't stop people from "innovating."
ReplyDeleteThe lack of comments is an obvious sign that my readers either don't want sci-fi, or that my sci-fi stinks. Good to know. It was just an experiment for the classroom, and now my students can see that sometimes a writer is out of his element.
Well my lack of comment was due to me being up in the mountains all weekend directing a camp and purging myself of technology. But now that I'm back in the grossness of city life, I'm catching up on my blogs, and I have to say, I loved your story! I'm a sci-fi geek, and I'm a sucker for dystopian stories! I'm impressed that you created that so quickly from a student's suggestion. They're going to love this and their assignment!
ReplyDeleteThanks Erica, I didn't mean it as condemnation towards anybody...my numbers across the board were down for this post. It just isn't what drives people to my site.
DeleteIt did, however, prompt to to make a new tab (excerpts and short stories); so in a way, it finally motivated me to do something that was long overdue.
That is pretty cool that you have a separate tab for these sorts of things. I've considered doing something like that, but I'm not quite sure how to manage it yet on WordPress. I'm guessing I'd have to post it as a regular entry, then just add to my new tab page. Also, I'm not so sure I'm ready to share short stories and things of that nature. I currently only have one tiny story on my blog, and that was published more as a way to relieve some pent up feelings. I'm way too self-conscious of my creative writing, which is why I just stick to blogging. It's lower key, fun for me, and I don't obsess about what others think about my crazy entries. But I'm glad people like you and Natalie put it out there, 'cause I really enjoy reading them! Keep it up! :)
DeleteOMG, I just read 3001 The Final Odyssey, and this totally reminds me of it! It made me want to learn more about how it all went down...I love stories and history, so this, combining both, really held my attention.
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